This is pretty good, for a first effort; some quite good framing (for example, the low angle shots). I'd debate a couple of the titles with you (for example, the phone) but overall you've done well. Next time you might want to think about the choice of transitions and the text you use for the titles (it's a little hard to read sometimes...)
This is pretty good, for a first effort; some quite good framing (for example, the low angle shots). I'd debate a couple of the titles with you (for example, the phone) but overall you've done well. Next time you might want to think about the choice of transitions and the text you use for the titles (it's a little hard to read sometimes...)
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